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[elspethdixon]

Kissing scenes are maddeningly hard to write (how many ways are there to say "then A stuck his tongue in B's mouth" without sounding cliched or stupid?). I don't know how people who regularly write pwps do it without repeating themselves all over the place.

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[elspethdixon.livejournal.com]

kissing scenes are definitely the hardest type of scene to write.

*nods* Give me action sequences any day. Though, if you repeat yourself in sex scenes, you do it well enough that I don't notice.

[crimsonquills.livejournal.com]

I always think I've gotten all the excessive repeats out by the time I post, but when I reread my sex scenes, I always notice them again. *facepalm* I kind of depend on the hotness distracting people. *g*