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[elspethdixon]

Kissing scenes are maddeningly hard to write (how many ways are there to say "then A stuck his tongue in B's mouth" without sounding cliched or stupid?). I don't know how people who regularly write pwps do it without repeating themselves all over the place.

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[elspethdixon.livejournal.com]

My personal keyboard-smash-arg phrase is "deepened the kiss." That, and comparing any part of the human body to a rosebud. Especially nipples.

[northstar-rocks.livejournal.com]

Oh the rosebud thing! Oh that one drives me nuts for some reason, i haven't figured out why yet, it just does though.
::Crazy idea:: I want to compile a list of things from fanfictions that drive me nuts and write a wonderfully bad story now, using them all, every single thing that irritates me... XD buuuuut i'm to lazy ::shrug::