Aww, I'm so glad to read the final chapter. This has been consistently, a wonderful and seamless merge between the two canons. I always look forward to your fic (though I tend to get caught up in reading and agreeing with other people's reviews, and forget about reviewing myself!).
I particularly loved the mental image of the floor covered in great sweeping curves and shapes of formulae. And Tony defeating the metal woman with maths. Yay! And the metal woman shape-shifting between her innate Ultron shape and Dr Doom, Red Skull and the Mandarin - although I couldn't quite place the spiky armour: was that War Machine?
...I did find a few typos in this bit towards the end: "They walked through the cobbled streets to the street were [where] their workshops stood, long empty and cobwebbed with neglect, but with everything still their [there] waiting for them, for before he had left, the soldier had bought both buildings outright with the money that remained to him from his soldiering days, so that they would not be lent [let] to new tenants in their absence."
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Date: 2009-02-17 10:17 am (UTC)I particularly loved the mental image of the floor covered in great sweeping curves and shapes of formulae. And Tony defeating the metal woman with maths. Yay! And the metal woman shape-shifting between her innate Ultron shape and Dr Doom, Red Skull and the Mandarin - although I couldn't quite place the spiky armour: was that War Machine?
...I did find a few typos in this bit towards the end:
"They walked through the cobbled streets to the street were [where] their workshops stood, long empty and cobwebbed with neglect, but with everything still their [there] waiting for them, for before he had left, the soldier had bought both buildings outright with the money that remained to him from his soldiering days, so that they would not be lent [let] to new tenants in their absence."