Date: 2008-12-07 01:51 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] nataku-kun.livejournal.com
Ah hah hah, yeah, but don't be too hard on yourself. The story flows very well (given that there's two styles in it and such) and nothing seems that out of place
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