I really like the way you go back and forth between the two POV, it serves as a wonderful sort of primer for the personalities of the two main characters, a chance to get to know them both and get used to them before you reunite them and get the sparks flying
Thanks! We were actually trying to do a sort "background-primer" thing in a lot of places in this, since we used such a huge cast of characters, and since there were next to no Iron Man fans around in comics fandom when we first started writing.
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Date: 2008-02-21 10:50 pm (UTC)Thanks! We were actually trying to do a sort "background-primer" thing in a lot of places in this, since we used such a huge cast of characters, and since there were next to no Iron Man fans around in comics fandom when we first started writing.