Fixed the "millions" (and the one place I'd transposed the i and e in "Leiter"). Whay exactly strikes you as off about that one sentence? "Bumped" and "bounced" in close proximity? How godawful perky Honey-Sue is being?
The "slave-time" in-joke isn't my fault, though. It's a schmoopy relationship-joke from the book, because Bond and Honey are both secretly huge dorks. also, Bond secretly gets off on being dominated, you know he does
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Date: 2006-09-08 01:38 am (UTC)The "slave-time" in-joke isn't my fault, though. It's a schmoopy relationship-joke from the book, because Bond and Honey are both secretly huge dorks.
also, Bond secretly gets off on being dominated, you know he does