Is it wrong that it's the violent, unblanced co-dependancy that I find cute?
The nanites are fast becoming one (some?) of my favourite "characters" in this piece to write, irritating amount of passive voice and all. They're not evil, they're just socially mal-adjusted. Really, if they could learn to comunicate with the rest of the Authority, they'd fit right in.
I'm almost sorry I'm going to end by electrocuting them all. but not really, 'cause having Angie bleed nanites out her eyes after Jenny accidentally zaps her and Midnighter as well will be cool
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Date: 2006-05-15 03:02 am (UTC)The nanites are fast becoming one (some?) of my favourite "characters" in this piece to write, irritating amount of passive voice and all. They're not evil, they're just socially mal-adjusted. Really, if they could learn to comunicate with the rest of the Authority, they'd fit right in.
I'm almost sorry I'm going to end by electrocuting them all.
but not really, 'cause having Angie bleed nanites out her eyes after Jenny accidentally zaps her and Midnighter as well will be cool