The identity play in this is awesome! I love the way both we and the characters got to see flashes of Tony and Bruce's other identities, without ever giving the game away entirely. Also, you do the hottest not-entirely-explicit porn ever. :-D And I did notice Tony kept comparing Bruce to Cap. *grins*
Identity pr0n is one of the great gifts superheroes have given to the world *grins* I was originally going to have Bruce at least figure it out (he is the World's Greatest Detective) but I couldn't figure out how to get that across from Tony's pov. And I secretly think Tony compares everyone he sleeps with to Cap,or at least everyone male. Possibly even before he was rescued from the ice ("This guy is really hot, but not as hot as my fantasy of going back in time and sleeping with Captain America").
The whole time I was writing the sex scene, my brain was going, "Nooo, I can't talk about their feelings! What will I do to avoid giving anatomical details? Why can't I just post it as is with [insert kiss here] and [blowjob goes here] written in?" Seriously, the first and last section of the fic were written in one or two sittings, and then the "sex" scene took about two weeks, wherein it was compiled one painful line at a time.
Of course, you've now made me desperately want a fic written from Bruce's POV in which Bruce meets Tony and Steve together, after Tony and Steve have paired up and are either out, or obvious enough that Bruce makes the connection...
I kind of adore that idea, too, but it would involve trying to write Bruce's pov, which I've got zero experience with.
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Identity pr0n is one of the great gifts superheroes have given to the world *grins* I was originally going to have Bruce at least figure it out (he is the World's Greatest Detective) but I couldn't figure out how to get that across from Tony's pov. And I secretly think Tony compares everyone he sleeps with to Cap,or at least everyone male. Possibly even before he was rescued from the ice ("This guy is really hot, but not as hot as my fantasy of going back in time and sleeping with Captain America").
The whole time I was writing the sex scene, my brain was going, "Nooo, I can't talk about their feelings! What will I do to avoid giving anatomical details? Why can't I just post it as is with [insert kiss here] and [blowjob goes here] written in?" Seriously, the first and last section of the fic were written in one or two sittings, and then the "sex" scene took about two weeks, wherein it was compiled one painful line at a time.
Of course, you've now made me desperately want a fic written from Bruce's POV in which Bruce meets Tony and Steve together, after Tony and Steve have paired up and are either out, or obvious enough that Bruce makes the connection...
I kind of adore that idea, too, but it would involve trying to write Bruce's pov, which I've got zero experience with.