ext_87923 ([identity profile] nicpick.livejournal.com) wrote in [personal profile] elspethdixon 2008-05-25 08:15 am (UTC)

Ooh! I just stumbled across this, and it is seriously one of the best ficlets I've read in a while. I LOVED the twist at the end, as well as the lead-up. It was really perfectly executed.

Tony and Steve are amazing. Still the same characters, but with that hint of added *something* that a really good AU brings.

Tony's eyes traveled slowly over Steve's half-clad form, and he felt the tingling feeling spring to life across his skin again. "That's not all I want."

I had to point that passage out specifically because it is beautiful and made my brain short-circuit.

You really are an excellent author! *fangirly*

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